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10 March 2007 @ 01:17 pm
Title: Slide off the Moon
Chapter: Chapter 1
Warnings: minor violence
Notes: the first chapter, also rewritten from the original (which was never finished, so there are no links to it anywhere on the web. XD), although the happenings from Valafar's arrival in Alda and beyond are very different than they were in the original. I like them more. much, much more. *shakes head* all changes recommended by the critiques I received in class have been applied as I saw fit, as well as a few changes I made on my own.
Summary: subject to future change. Valafar has dedicated his whole life to his god. He loves him like he has loved no other.

And he has decided to free him from his eternal prison on the moon.

What he doesn’t know is that doing so would release a power more destructive than he could imagine. Satarel, God of Death and the Moon, was imprisoned on the moon over a millennium ago after a battle with his twin brother Nemamiah.

And upon his release he would immediately hunt down his brother to exact his revenge.

For what better vengeance could there be than to have his brother under his control for all eternity?
Previous chapters: Prologue

this is open for critiquing. feel free to do so. be brutal.



At High Noon, the sun is a fat, bulbous eye glaring blearily down at the empty temple.Collapse )
 
 
state of mind: hungry
rocking out to: 12012 - Icy Cold City
 
 
10 March 2007 @ 01:04 pm
Title: Slide off the Moon
Chapter: Prologue
Warnings: ah...cult-like blood-letting?
Notes: TOTALLY rewritten from the original, which will never, ever, ever be posted on the internet. ever. although if you're really curious you could go see it here. x_x it was actually rewritten so that I could turn it in as part of my second story for my Writing Fiction class, but I would have gotten around to it eventually.
Summary: subject to future change. Valafar has dedicated his whole life to his god. He loves him like he has loved no other.

And he has decided to free him from his eternal prison on the moon.

What he doesn’t know is that doing so would release a power more destructive than he could imagine. Satarel, God of Death and the Moon, was imprisoned on the moon over a millennium ago after a battle with his twin brother Nemamiah.

And upon his release he would immediately hunt down his brother to exact his revenge.

For what better vengeance could there be than to have his brother under his control for all eternity?

this is open for critiquing. feel free to do so. be brutal.



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Chapter 1
 
 
state of mind: bored
rocking out to: A Perfect Circle - 3 Libra's
 
 
07 November 2006 @ 02:24 pm
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: SasuNaru
Themes: angst, fly, dizzy, feel, mistake, heat, tired, desire, luck, bound
Rating: R, 'cause there's nothing really graphic
Notes: maa~ it's been a while, hasn't it? >.>; I haven't been in the writing mood, lately. OHWELL, I had to do it, so I did. I had to fight with each and every one of these to get them out, but...I'm satisfied, so it's okay. XD it's going to be ten sentences a round, now, 'cause I'm obsessive compulsive and have gotten to the point where I can do that.

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state of mind: accomplished
rocking out to: Vidoll - Mayura Pisaroto
 
 
11 October 2006 @ 04:25 pm
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: SasuNaru
Themes: secrets, photograph, fall, beautiful, sweet, sex, fantasy, lost
Rating: DEFINITELY up to NC-17.
Notes: ah...most of these were written while listening to evanescence's new CD, so if some of them are little dark and creepy? that's why, and I apologize. >.>;;

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state of mind: dorky
rocking out to: Tim O'Brien - Norwegian Wood
 
 
08 October 2006 @ 03:08 am
Theme: Destruction
Pairing/Characters: Sasuke/Naruto @ 5trueloves
Rating: Hard R/NC-17
Disclaimer/claimer: this belongs totally to kishimoto masashi. if it belonged to me? it'd be a lot more graphic.
Notes/Summary: ah...there's mentions of violence and some semi-graphic sex. I didn't like this one much at first, but as I got to the third real paragraph it grew on me.

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state of mind: sleepy
rocking out to: Hamasaki Ayumi - tasking
 
 
 
04 October 2006 @ 05:11 pm
SasuNaru @ yaoi_sentences
Uzumaki Naruto @ 5trueloves
Sano/Mizuki @ 10_laughs

7secrets Sasunaru challengeCollapse )

word_guru Naruto (general) challengeCollapse )
 
 
state of mind: ecstatic
rocking out to: Evanescence - Call Me When You're Sober
 
 
01 October 2006 @ 04:16 pm
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: SasuNaru
Themes: death, war, skin, discovery, breathless, now, silence, wild, break, sick, hungry, nostalgia, trouble
Rating: DEFINITELY up to NC-17.
discovery and breathless involve slight spoilers from chapters 307 and 308.

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state of mind: restless
rocking out to: The Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers - Forth Eorlingas
 
 
01 October 2006 @ 04:16 pm
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: SasuNaru
Themes: red, blood, poison, cold, line between love and hate, wet, hurt, kiss, urgent, night, and communication
Rating: up to R (because the sex mentioned briefly isn't really that graphic), and there is violence in this.
maaa~, these are totally out of order. XD; 'cause I can never do this kinda stuff in order.

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state of mind: need sleeeeep...
rocking out to: Hamasaki Ayumi - is this LOVE?